Friday, January 15, 2016

Saturday Spankings -- "I'm Not Done."

Hello, everyone! This is my first Saturday Spankings blog hop. Since my debut novel with Blushing comes out next month, I decided to post a series of short stories in the meantime. Below is an excerpt from one couple's story. I'll post the first full story on Monday. Thanks for visiting!

(P.S. To those of you who are experienced with this, I'm not sure I did this correctly, so please let me know if I am missing a link or something! I don't want to end up standing in the corner lol.)

Sonya is in trouble with her husband, Anthony. She doesn't want to be spanked, and tried valiantly to talk her wait out of it, to no avail....






She couldn't take it anymore. Every crack of the paddle lit her on fire, a burning sensation screaming across her backside.



She tried to propel herself forward, but he held fast. He paused, put the paddle down, and rubbed her aching bottom.



“I'm not done, young lady,” he said, and she groaned. How could she possibly take anymore?



“Anthony, please,” she pleaded.



“No,” he said angrily.“We are done when I say we're done. I want this to be the last time I ever spank your ass for this.”







19 comments:

  1. You did it perfectly, and welcome! Hope you'll also share some snippets of your new novel when it's ready to share. I look forward to reading them. In the meantime, your short stories sound intriguing.

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  2. Welcome! Looks like you know exactly what you're doing! I don't think Sonya's going anywhere in a hurry.

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    1. LOL! Nope, she isn't. Thank you for your help. I really appreciate it!

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  3. Everything looks good to me. Welcome. I will be sure to check out your short stories. I do the same every Monday, I invite you to come over and check them out sometime.

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    1. Great, thanks! I will head on over and check it out. :)

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  4. OUCH! And OUCH! again. Methinks it will definitely be the very last time! ! Great snippet.

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  5. Welcome to Satspanks, it's exciting having you here. It's always worth trying to talk your way out of a spanking. Succeeding is a different matter!

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    1. Thanks, Jaye! And I agree -- not a very wise tactic, though it's understandable!

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  6. Welcome to Sat Spanks! Great snippet. I look forward to reading your book. :)

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  7. Uh oh, someone's spanking isn't finished... Great excerpt. :)

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    1. Nope, she's in it for the long haul lol. Thanks!

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  8. Welcome to Saturday Spanks!! Sounds like a great book!

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  9. Hi, Renee. Thanks for the welcome!

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  10. Welcome to Saturday Spankings, Jane, and congrats on your upcoming debut!

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