Tuesday, May 17, 2016

WIP it Up Wednesday - Present for Punishment

It's Wednesday, so it must be time for the WIP it Up Wednesday
blog hop, the hop where we get to share a snippet from our current work in progress and see what everyone else has been working on!

Our excerpt today comes from His Submissive, the second book in our Boston Dom's series, and tells the story of two of our favorite characters from My Dom, Hillary and Matteo. Hillary wants to be a submissive, but is having a tough time finding a dominant she can trust. Matteo agrees to help her out. But it's not all fun and games! When Hillary gets caught being dishonest, Matteo has to teach her how to present herself for punishment...

"Tonight, I'm going to teach you how to present for a punishment. Do you know what presenting is, Hillary?"

Her eyes were wide, and her hands shaking as he took one and led her to the bed. "No, sir," she whispered.

"Kneel on the bed," he instructed, gesturing.

She did, and her dress made it awkward as her legs were close together. Easily solved. "Hike your dress up to your belly."

She obeyed, kneeling on the bed, lifting the hem of her dress so that he could see the curve of her ass. She wore a thin, lace-trimmed pair of nude-colored panties that barely covered her. They would remain. She'd feel his belt easily through the thin fabric.

"Now, chest down on the bed, and hold your arms out straight in front of you," he instructed. He could hear her breathing from where he stood just a few feet apart from her as she obeyed, her knees on the bed, chest down and she stretched her arms in front of her.

"Good girl," he murmured. So beautiful.

He was still pissed she'd been dishonest, but it pleased him to know that she trusted him, not only to teach her how to be a submissive, but also to discipline her. It took serious strength to do that. The mere presentation of her body, his to punish, was already healing the breach of trust between them.

He took a step forward. Placing one hand firmly on her lower back, he pressed gently.

"Arch, baby," he said softly. She obeyed. Stepping back, he took in the scene and wished for a moment he hadn't chosen a presentation position. It was too easy to imagine getting up on the bed himself, taking her from behind, sliding into her after he warmed her ass...

Inhaling, he stepped back, forcing himself to assume the role of disciplinarian.

She needed a spanking.

That's all for today! Leave us a comment and let us know what you thought! And don't forget to visit the other hop participants for more fun excerpts!


  1. I love it when they present... so damn sexy! So, now I wonder how well she's going to do under the belt... It's a bit stingy that one ;)

  2. Lovely presentation all round! ;)